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[mahta naji]

سلام دوستان
when I was a teenager, I remember my father saying this proverb, "everyone is the archtect of his own fortune" .
این جمله از لحاظ ساختاری ایرادی نداره؟

همیار
دانش-آموزان-آلاء

[Soleyman.h_o_]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

سلام دوستان
when I was a teenager, I remember my father saying this proverb, "everyone is the archtect of his own fortune" .
این جمله از لحاظ ساختاری ایرادی نداره؟

همیار
دانش-آموزان-آلاء

Father was saying

[mahta naji]

@Soleyman-h_o_ ولی میگن اگه was رو هم ننویسیم درسته! چون remember اومده

میگن شبیه ساختار جمله های زیر هست

I saw u eating
I heard u saying it

البته من خودم تا حالا همچین ساختاری رو ندیدم!

[Soleyman.h_o_]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

@Soleyman-h_o_ ولی میگن اگه was رو هم ننویسیم درسته! چون remember اومده

میگن شبیه ساختار جمله های زیر هست

I saw u eating
I heard u saying it

البته من خودم تا حالا همچین ساختاری رو ندیدم!

اگه عادی بخای باشی درسته بابا مشکلی نیس ، یه سریا خیلی بخان گیر بدن گیرشونو میدن ، جمله مفهومش کاملا میرسه

[mahta naji]

@Soleyman-h_o_ نه من عادی نمیخوام بگم قوائد درستش برام مهمه من خودم قبول دارم که باید از past continuous استفاده کنیم

ولی نمیدونم چرا بعضیا میگن اگه قبل. father از was استفاده کنیم اشتباهه!

[Soleyman.h_o_]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

@Soleyman-h_o_ نه من عادی نمیخوام بگم قوائد درستش برام مهمه من خودم قبول دارم که باید از past continuous استفاده کنیم

ولی نمیدونم چرا بعضیا میگن اگه قبل. father از was استفاده کنیم اشتباهه!

نظرمن اینه که father was saying درستشه ، حالا نمیدونم من زبانم خیلی خوب نیست بقیه شاید بدونن

[mahta naji]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

سلام دوستان
when I was a teenager, I remember my father saying this proverb, "everyone is the archtect of his own fortune" .
این جمله از لحاظ ساختاری ایرادی نداره؟

همیار
دانش-آموزان-آلاء

@sheyda-fkh

[mahta naji]

@Soleyman-h_o_

thanks

[mahta naji]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

سلام دوستان
when I was a teenager, I remember my father saying this proverb, "everyone is the archtect of his own fortune" .
این جمله از لحاظ ساختاری ایرادی نداره؟

همیار
دانش-آموزان-آلاء

دوستان در archtect
i جامونده منظورم architect هست

[sheyda.fkh]

@mahta-kamali
سلام دوست عزیز :smiling_face_with_halo:
در انگلیسی spoken(محاوره ای) جمله ای که شما میگی کاملا درسته و مفهوم رو میرسونه
از نظر ساختار گارامری بهتره که بگیم

I remember my father was saying this proverb when I was a teenager، everyone is the architect of his own fortune
معنی جمله بالا میشه: یادم می آید (حال) وقتی نوجوان بودم (گذشته ی ساده) میگفت (گذشته ی استمراری) هرکس معمار ثروت خودش است

ولی وقتی اولش میگی when I was a teenager انگار میخوای راجب یه اتفاق در دوران نوجوانیت یعنی گذشته بگی و بعد نمیتونی بگی یادم می آید و از حال استفاده کنی
امیدوارم درست گفته باشم و مفهوم رو رسونده باشم :).

[mahta naji]

@sheyda-fkh خییلی ممنونم ازتون کامل یاد گرفتم
🌸🌸TNX a million

[Ali Masouminya]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

سلام دوستان
when I was a teenager, I remember my father saying this proverb, "everyone is the archtect of his own fortune" .
این جمله از لحاظ ساختاری ایرادی نداره؟

همیار
دانش-آموزان-آلاء

Hi. Morning
Your sentence from grammatical view is correct, and
doesn't have any mistake

[mahta naji]

Ali Masouminya

Hi sir
actually someone tell me that my sentence doesent have a mistake in grammer way. but as you know we use past continuous form of verb for an action that
takes a time. for example in my sentence the
father was saying proverb because speaking and
!!? saying something are taking time. aren't they

and now its question for me that frome what rule my sentence is correct
?woud you mind explaning it more

[Ali Masouminya]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

Ali Masouminya

Hi sir
actually someone tell me that my sentence doesent have a mistake in grammer way. but as you know we use past continuous form of verb for an action that
takes a time. for example in my sentence the
father was saying proverb because speaking and
!!? saying something are taking time. aren't they

and now its question for me that frome what rule my sentence is correct
?woud you mind explaning it more

Actually yes. But there is a mistake in your text and
you shouldn't say "aren't they?" you should say weren't ?they

[Ali Masouminya]

Ali Masouminya در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

Ali Masouminya

Hi sir
actually someone tell me that my sentence doesent have a mistake in grammer way. but as you know we use past continuous form of verb for an action that
takes a time. for example in my sentence the
father was saying proverb because speaking and
!!? saying something are taking time. aren't they

and now its question for me that frome what rule my sentence is correct
?woud you mind explaning it more

Actually yes. But there is a mistake in your text and
you shouldn't say "aren't they?" you should say weren't ?they

As a matter of fact you have used indirect speech and it isn't necessary that you use to be there

[mahta naji]

Ali Masouminya
no I dont think so
aren't they is true

?by the way you didn't say why my sentence is true

[mahta naji]

Ali Masouminya در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

Ali Masouminya

Hi sir
actually someone tell me that my sentence doesent have a mistake in grammer way. but as you know we use past continuous form of verb for an action that
takes a time. for example in my sentence the
father was saying proverb because speaking and
!!? saying something are taking time. aren't they

and now its question for me that frome what rule my sentence is correct
?woud you mind explaning it more

Actually yes. But there is a mistake in your text and
you shouldn't say "aren't they?" you should say weren't ?they

I used" aren't they "for the sentence "speaking and saying
" something are taking time
?got it

[Ali Masouminya]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

Ali Masouminya در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

Ali Masouminya

Hi sir
actually someone tell me that my sentence doesent have a mistake in grammer way. but as you know we use past continuous form of verb for an action that
takes a time. for example in my sentence the
father was saying proverb because speaking and
!!? saying something are taking time. aren't they

and now its question for me that frome what rule my sentence is correct
?woud you mind explaning it more

Actually yes. But there is a mistake in your text and
you shouldn't say "aren't they?" you should say weren't ?they

I used" aren't they "for the sentence "speaking and saying
" something are taking time
?got it

Let me

[Ali Masouminya]

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

Ali Masouminya

Hi sir
actually someone tell me that my sentence doesent have a mistake in grammer way. but as you know we use past continuous form of verb for an action that
takes a time. for example in my sentence the
father was saying proverb because speaking and
!!? saying something are taking time. aren't they

and now its question for me that frome what rule my sentence is correct
?woud you mind explaning it more

I don't like to say this but you have lot of mistake in your text. For example you must use “, “ after using starters (actually), you must use uppercase letter at beginning of sentences (Actually, But, For example not actually, but, for example), when you use tag question you must use “,” before your tag , when you use negative abbreviation you must use “ ‘ “ (doesn’t not doesent), and also above all, the word “ someone” is singular and you must use third person “s” (someone tells me not tell me) and etc

[mahta naji]

Ali Masouminya در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

@mahta-kamali در گرامر یک متن گفته است:

Ali Masouminya

Hi sir
actually someone tell me that my sentence doesent have a mistake in grammer way. but as you know we use past continuous form of verb for an action that
takes a time. for example in my sentence the
father was saying proverb because speaking and
!!? saying something are taking time. aren't they

and now its question for me that frome what rule my sentence is correct
?woud you mind explaning it more

I don't like to say this but you have lot of mistake in your text. For example you must use “, “ after using starters (actually), you must use uppercase letter at beginning of sentences (Actually, But, For example not actually, but, for example), when you use tag question you must use “,” before your tag , when you use negative abbreviation you must use “ ‘ “ (doesn’t not doesent), and also above all, the word “ someone” is singular and you must use third person “s” (someone tells me not tell me) and etc

!now it is my turn to tell your mistakes

  in this text you must use "a "  before  lot of and if you dont wanna use "a" before lot ,you shoud say lots of.

on the other hand using capital letter at biginning of
sentence in informal sentences is insignificant

about" doesn't "I shoud say that every one konws how it must written
.because of being busy I 'm a little careless now